nolona kysyn voisko joku tarkistaa mun englannin tiivistelmän
ooooon tosi huono englannissa ja kirjotan kamalaa kapulatekstiä... käytin google-kääntäjää apuna enkä tajua yhtään onko toi edes englantia :)
jos joku vapaaehtoinen ilmoittautuu niin kiitos
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opiskelen ympäristöalaa ja piti kirjoittaa englanninkielinen tiivistelmä suomenkielisestä tekstistä... valitsin ensinnäkin aivan liian vaikean tekstin, enkä osannut sitä kunnolla kääntää, mutta tää saa nyt luvan kelvata
World after old bulb
EU has prepared directives to curb energy use and reduce greenhouse gas emissions. Eco-design Directive, will bring energy-using products for energy efficiency requirements. Directive will change lighting solutions significantly in coming years.
Old bulbs producing ends, and new technology comes to market. This reduces emissions and users saves money because new lamps spend less electricity.
Since September 2009, manufacturers can’t deliver matt glass bulbs for sale. In September 2011 ends widely used, 60 W bulb manufacturing and one year later other bulbs.
The regulations will be reviewed every five years. Because manufacturers invest heavily in energy efficiency, it is expected that in 2013 demand levels continue to tighten.
Halogen-, energy saving- and led-lamps are good alternative for old bulbs. Chancing lamps could save 50% energy.
LED lamps are strongly developing, in future they will win energy-saving lights, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
Muutamaa kohtaa mietin, että mitä tarkoitat, ja oletan, että ne ovat suoria käännöksiä.
Eco-design Directive, will bring energy-using products for energy efficiency requirements
Eco-Design Directive will bring energy efficiency requirements for products
korjaan vähän kielioppia vaan, voin olla väärässäkin, mutta näin itse kirjoittaisin:
World after old bulb
EU has prepared directives to curb energy use and reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
-> olisko EU has prepared directives to the use of curb energy and to the reduction of the greenhouse gas emissions.
Eco-design Directive, will bring energy-using products for energy efficiency requirements.
-> Eco-design directive will bring efficiency requirements for products who use energy.
Directive will change lighting solutions significantly in coming years.
The directive... in the coming years.
Old bulbs producing ends, and new technology comes to market. This reduces emissions and users saves money because new lamps spend less electricity.
ok
Since September 2009, manufacturers can’t deliver matt glass bulbs for sale.
ok jos on jo mennyt
In September 2011 ends widely used, 60 W bulb manufacturing and one year later other bulbs.
tässä väärä aikamuoto eli in September 2011the manufacturing of widely used 60 w bulb will end. Next year all bulb manufactruring will end.
The regulations will be reviewed every five years. Because manufacturers invest heavily in energy efficiency, it is expected that in 2013 demand levels continue to tighten.
2013 ja demand sanojen väliin the
Halogen-, energy saving- and led-lamps are good alternative for old bulbs. Chancing lamps could save 50% energy.
50% ja energy sanojen väliin of.
LED lamps are strongly developing,
paa piste
in future they will win energy-saving lights, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
In the future..
toivottavasti auttaa vähän...
In September 2011 ends widely used, 60 W bulb manufacturing and one year later other bulbs
Widely used 60W light bulb manufacturing ends in September 2011, and a year later other bulb manufacturing is stopped.
Old bulbs producing ends, and new technology comes to market.
The production of the old light bulbs will end and new way of technology will enter the markets.
Kun puhut direktiivistä, käytä muoto
the directive
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En ole koskaan kuullut termiä halogen- tai led-lamp. Ainoastaan halogen-lights ja led-lights.
LED lamps are strongly developing, in future they will win energy-saving lights, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced. 8LED lamps are strongly developing, in future they will win energy-saving lights, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
The development of the LED-lights is increasing and the consumerprices are expected to decrease. They are expected to be the leading brand in the light market. (pitäisi nähdä suomenkielinen teksti, että tekstisi viimeinen lause olisi varmasti ymmärrettävissä.)
World after the old light bulb
EU has prepared directives to curb the consumption of energy and reduce the greenhouse gas emissions. Eco-design Directive will bring the energy-using products into compliance with the energy efficiency requirements.
Directive will change the lighting solutions significantly in the coming years. The production of old light bulbs will cease, and the new technology will be available to the market. This will reduce emissions and users save money because the new lamps use less power. Since September 2009, the manufacturers can’t produce matt glass light bulbs for sale. In September 2011, manufacturing of widely used, 60 W light bulbs, will end and a year later manufacturing of other light bulbs as well. The regulations will be reviewed in every five years. Because the manufacturers invest heavily into the energy efficiency, it is expected that in 2013 the standards will be tighten. Halogens, energy saving lamps and led lamps are good alternatives to the old light bulbs. Changing the lamps (currently used) could save 50% more energy. LED lamps are strongly developing, in the future they will outdo the/other energy-saving lightning, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
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No, niinhän hän sanoikin, ettei oo varma.
Vaihda Lamps, pitää olla lights or light bulbs.''
Vikassa lauseessa outdo tilalle Replace
World after the old light bulb
EU has prepared directives to curb the consumption of energy and reduce the greenhouse gas emissions. Eco-design Directive will bring the energy-using products into compliance with the energy efficiency requirements.
Directive will change the lighting solutions significantly in the coming years. The production of old light bulbs will cease, and the new technology will be available to the market. This will reduce emissions and users save money because the new lamps use less power. Since September 2009, the manufacturers can’t produce matt glass light bulbs for sale. In September 2011, manufacturing of widely used, 60 W light bulbs, will end and a year later manufacturing of other light bulbs as well. The regulations will be reviewed in every five years. Because the manufacturers invest heavily into the energy efficiency, it is expected that in 2013 the standards will be tighten. Halogens, energy saving lamps and led lamps are good alternatives to the old light bulbs. Changing the lamps (currently used) could save 50% more energy. LED lamps are strongly developing, in the future they will outdo the/other energy-saving lightning, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
että ne syrjäyttävät eivätkä korvaa!
Yhtä kohtaa hiukan ihmettelen, siis ajatuksellsesti, ei käännösmielessä.
Sanotaanko suomenkielisessä versiossa tosiaan että valmistajien energiatehokkuusinvestointien vuoksi direktiiviä tullaan tiukentamaan? Because the manufacturers invest heavily into the energy efficiency, it is expected that in 2013 the standards will be tighten.
power sanan muuttaisin energyksi (lamps use less power)
Directive will change the lighting solutions - taitaa olla lightning vai?
kävin siivoamassa keittiön ja ole aivan ihmeissäni
ISO KIITOS!!!
ja nyt saa kyllä huutaa kun olitte näin mukavia :)
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http://www.teknologiateollisuus.fi/fi/a/maailma-hehkulamppujen-j-lkeen…
siinä on niin paljon vaikeaa tekstiä, että en ala kaikkea referoimaan... tuollainen lyhyt saa kelvata
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Eco-design Directive, will bring energy-using products for energy efficiency requirements.
Hassu sanajärjestys.
Eco-Dasign Directive will bring energy efficiency requirements for energy-using products.
Old bulbs producing ends, and new technology comes to market. This reduces emissions and users saves money because new lamps spend less electricity.
Suosisin kuluttajaa käyttäjän sijaan.
Old light bulb production ends as the new technology enters the market. This reduces emissions and - by cutting the electricity use - saves the consumers' money.
Since September 2009, manufacturers can’t deliver matt glass bulbs for sale. In September 2011 ends widely used, 60 W bulb manufacturing and one year later other bulbs.
Aikamuodot kaivelevat vähän.
Since September 2009, delivering matt glass bulbs for sale has been prohibited. In September 2011 the manufacturing of the widely used 60 W bulb will end and in one year time the production of bulbs in general will be run down.
Halogen-, energy saving- and led-lamps are good alternative for old bulbs. Chancing lamps could save 50% energy.
alternetiveS - Changing lamps could save energy up to 50%.
LED lamps are strongly developing, in future they will win energy-saving lights, and the consumer prices are likely to be reduced.
Tuota win-termiä voisi tarkentaa, nyt tulee mieleen vain että lamput käyvät kaksintaistelun ja LED tökkää es-lamppua floretilla. Ja laittasin myös in THE future.
The World after the Old Light Bulb
EU has prepared several directives to control energy use and to reduce greenhouse gases. One of these directives is Eco-Design. It brings energy efficiency requirements to all energy using products. This directive will change the lightning industry dramatically.
The directive will shut down the production of the old light bulbs all together in September 2009. The production of the widely used 60 W lights will end in September 2011 and a year later also the production of lower efficiency bulbs will come to an end.
The regulations will be re-evaluated every five years. It is expected that the demands will be tighten in 2013.
There are good alternatives already on the market. Halogen lights, energy saving lights and LED-lights can be used in the same products as the old light bulbs. The save in energy use is 50% when using the alternatives.
The development of the LED-lights is fast and in the future they are expected to be more energy efficient than the energy saving lights. At the same time the consumer prices are expected to go down.
ala korjaa jos et osaa. Lightning=salamointi.
korjata vaikka tuosta viimeisestä yrityksestä:
The World after the Old Light Bulb
The(!)EU has prepared several directives to control energy use and to reduce greenhouse gases. One of these directives is Eco-Design. It brings energy efficiency requirements to all energy-using products. This directive will change the lighting (ei lightning)industry dramatically. The directive will shut down the production of the old light bulbs altogether (ei all together) in September 2009. The production of the widely used 60 W bulbs will end in September 2011 and a year later the production of lower efficiency bulbs will also come to an end. The regulations will be reevaluated every five years. It is expected that the demands will be tighten further in 2013. There are good alternatives already on the market. Halogen lights, energy saving lights and LED-lights can be used in the same products as the old light bulbs. The reduction in energy use is 50% when using the alternatives. The development of the LED-lights is fast and in the future they are expected to be more energy efficient than the energy saving lights. At the same time the consumer prices are expected to go down.
Jne. Pieniä virheitä. Artikkelia puuttuu melkein kaikilta alusta. Tietenkin THE EU. Alkuperäistä en lukenut.
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